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Neural Foundry's avatar

Brillaint take on the folktale boundary concept here. The moment when Beth's mom grabs her from behind is genuinely disturbing cause it flips the whole safe-space idea on its head. I once got lost as akid in a neighborhood that felt familar but wrong, and the dissonance you captured really brings that back. The bruised wrist detail at the end tying everything together is chefs kiss.

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Great story - moves along at a rapid clip. Great concept too - Dark City meets Dawn of the Dead.

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